In This Quiet Evening Hour
Written in an older English, this piece swipes at those - of any religion - who would have us return to medieval times through their religious convictions, because, they argue, such times were in closer proximity to their gods; of their idea of what they see as their god.
This little conversation is a rather direct one-sided reply from "those gods". I use the plural, because I address all religions. But others will also see another Triune Being.
Imagine if we countered, that in order to do this properly, these ‘flat-earthed’ type advocates, would have to go back to speaking, in the case of this country, Chaucerian English, ancient Welsh and ancient Gaelic, not the modern English, Welsh or Gaelic! Whimsically, the under-carriage would collapse before even managing to taxi, let alone take-off.
Part I
What is this?
That thou dost think hast thou
the answer to Creation?
That by thine own intellect
Thou hast enworked
with your enfeebled minds
the origins of this great Universe?
What arrogance is this
that thou dost commit to
parchment, scrolls and earthenware,
the ministrations of greater beings?
The Creator even?
How dost thou account for Leviathan?
How dost thou account for Light?
How dost thou account for this Pull
upon the Earth, upon these Tides
that hast one thinking that this earth
Is indeed the Centre?
What arrogance!
Explain, forswear, how be’est
That thou didst rebuke thine own
in his explanation that it be the Sun
around which all revolves!
Explain, again, forswear, how be’est
that thou didst rebuke those
that do argue that this Earth be round?
That thou didst, as an hapless people,
An hapless communion
Demand most horrendous punishments
Tortures even,
for Enlightened Thinking,
Cruelty, likest which
in the Animal Kingdom, is unbeknownst,
unseen, aye yay, non-existent?
We sayst this fact again:
Cruelty, likest which
in the Animal Kingdom, is unbeknownst,
unseen, aye yay, non-existent!!
Explainest thou thineself!
How ist that thou dost drive
Each Generation
Each Century
To ever Greater Horror and Affliction
and, moreover,
That thou dost insist such Terror
ist perfection because such Horrors
are wrought in the Name Above All Names!
Moreover, that these Horrendities
be Our Demand,
Our Requirement
of thee to be
So sayst thou
In Supplication to Us!
We requirest of no such thing!
Again!
Explainest thou thine self!
Thine rambling Distortions and Perversions
of Universal Truth
That thou dost rebuke contemporary thinking,
That thou dost insist upon
an ancient and an peremptory
Interpretation of life’s very events …
Of Silliness and Vain-Glorious Imaginations
and Prognostications.
And by which dost thou
Upon Innocent People
Dost Visit the doings of Evil
of millennia before?!
Thou dost stand afore Me
Before Us
in thine lofty arrogance!
And Thou! Yay, Thine-self!!
What needst of this mat to kneel?
What needs to look to right and left
with silly utterances?
What needs to prostrate
With posterior lines, infinitesimal
Risen High in the Air
Posterior whiffs
are not to Our liking.
Blood sacrifices, alike
We have neh’r required this of you.
So We NOW requirest thou thine explanations
as to how thou dost arrive at thine
decision-making:
That the fairer sex shalt have no education!
That the fairer sex shalt not attend, even in
an veterinary role!
That Women and Girls shalt not speak
Unless they first be addressed by a man or men
Or else beaten by these Obnoxious Morality Police!
That men shalt be the stronger sex!
That women shalt always be secondary
subservient, and made to walk in
shadow?
And how dare thou thine arrogance
in the matter of sexuality.
We suggestest Thou do revisit
the Manifest Injustices,
Cruelties, and Crimes
that thou hast heaped upon
the Perfection of Our Creation
Where have We required thus,
these things?
By what means dost thou insist
upon vagina mutilation?
Explain the origin of your calculation!
How dost thou arriveest by this silly,
Vicious notion?
Such deliberations in thine thinking
are an Abhorrence to Us
What are these parchments that thou dost presume
to lay afore Me?
We know full well they are vainglorious imaginings
of a mere created being.
What?
It is Our Word?
What?
You do presume to define my pre-existence?!/!?
I recognise none of these ramblings!
These are the thoughts of mere men
Arrogant men, that whichest hast
status none, being merely created.
Men who love to walk the marketplace
receiving the Salutations of the people [i]
Is this not so?
Speak up!
Your silence dost most surely offend Us
For if thou dost say it is nay
Then thou dost contradict thine own writings
Thine own peculiar musings.
Part II
And what argument is this?
That thou who dost stand in haughty air,
that thou dost have Mine Ear
And yet thou, standest over there, dost argue likewise
even though thou dost both contend
the kindgom,
yet doest evil things of equal measure …
to kill, steal and destroy,
so say,
In the Name Above All Names!
And what, pray, are all these religions
that rebuke sciences and physics?
What are these religions and vain ramblings,
these silly notions of humankind
that would have the Universe created
only eight millennia ago?
Part III
To thine homes return!
And consider how such silliness avails you
… that thou hast, all,
deined to fit The Name Above All Names
into an code
that is as far removed from The Name
as tis east from west
as tis north from south
And hearken well
For this hath come unto Us … …
We Three
Mark well this possibility
It is most surely no great thing to extinguish life
For We have only to speak, and it is …
The Universe
that thou hast demanded remain unchanged
since Time began
Suddenly, thou dost stand there before Us
Hapless,
Agape
Wondering how it is
That thine universe
ist but the merest speck,
An dot upon thine page,
An fleck of dust
Changest now thine ways
Broaden thou thine minds
Examine thou thine consciences
These are the commands
that We give thee
in modern tongue
So We shall show you things
the like of which are yet
not even comprehended
in this twenty-first century
You wouldst do well
to remove thine sandal
for We see all too well
your collective desire
to see thineselves as Our Equal
Arrogance alone
permits a mind to perceive
Created as equal to Creator
Thou hast earned Our sore Displeasure
We are Resolved
to rid Ourselves
To start afresh
Be away
We leave it, as We always Do
to Nature
The Human Species is but an aspect of Nature
It is here today, gone tomorrow
Nature remains
Nature restarts
Fashions itself afresh
Finis
Ian Bradley Marshall
30 September 2024
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LIVERPOOL
© 2024 Ian Bradley Marshall
Written in 2020
[i] Matthew 23 : 7
[ii] Banner Image The Name Above All Names יהוה - YHWH - carved in Hebrew auf der Baum circa 1999 auf dem Cleeve-Hügel (2020 still visible)
Ken Webb is a writer and proofreader. His website, kennwebb.com, showcases his work as a writer, blogger and podcaster, resting on his successive careers as a police officer, progressing to a junior lawyer in succession and trusts as a Fellow of the Institute of Legal Executives, a retired officer with the Royal Air Force Volunteer Reserve, and latterly, for three years, the owner and editor of two lifestyle magazines in Liverpool.
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